9 thoughts on “Page 35

  1. Hello Lovelies!

    Fun fact, two different versions of page 35 were made. After finishing version one, it just felt… wrong. I tried brainstorming some alternatives, and decided to remake the page and take the story in a different direction. This “slight” change resulted in 6 future pages being reworked and two completely new pages being added. Oh, the sacrifices one makes for one’s craft…

    Worth it!

    If you are curious to see what the first version of this page looked like, you can check it out here.

    Your bonus third month upload will be Tuesday, May 30th.

    ~ Tieback

  2. Let me guess : it was the trees in “panel” 4 that felt wrong. Or the lack of a “HMPH” next to lark in panel 1. 😛

    Jokes aside, the subtle changes in Lark’s facial expressions between the two versions are interesting. She seems to get snarkier, perhaps trying to match her new friend. 🙂

    • Good eye! I did make Lark a little snarkier, and I didn’t like how any of the tree backgrounds looked in the original. Also, I just didn’t like how the dialogue was transitioning, so I added some things.

  3. I absolutely love the change you made, GREAT CALL. Maybe after you finish you can add the alternate version in Extras or for patreon lol

    • Dang, that’s a good idea! Unfortunately, the original page/panel sketches are long gone. If I end up doing something like this again, I will remember to post the originals of Patreon. Thanks for the idea 🙂

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